Great redo! Like the blues and orange in the background to pick up the colors in the photos. The simple text makes it clear who is who. But you're cuter than John.
What a sweet page... Had to look to see what it was all about... Well, all I can say is that is a well traveled hat... very cool to capture that memory!!!! Nice contrast of colors also... from the soft background to the same colors but more prominent shown in the photos