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My First Layout Version "B"
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My First Layout Version "B"

This is my first LO!! Please be honest in critiquing because it will only make me better :) (I can take it!!!!)

All papers and elements from Peppermint (One Little Bird) Time Capsule.

Template from Paislee Press.

Cute kid - All mine

(this version "B" has a different background than version "A")
I love the composition of your LO! A lot of new digiscrappers don't get the hang of drop shadows right away, but I'd say you've mastered them as if you've been scrapping for a long time now :)
 
Suzy, wow!!! fabulous page!! and its your first??? oh my!! then we are going to be blown away by your LO's, I can just see it!!! as Meg said, wonderful work on the shadows!! and lovely photo as well by the way!!! :)
 
Thank you both so much! I must tell you though, the ribbon and the scatter had drop shadows on them BUT for the other ones I used Peppermint's mind blowing tutorial ;)

Wow - I'm so excited that you both think they're good because I think you guys rock the LOs!! TYTYTY!!!!
 
Suezee - This is an awesome first page!!! Really, it's a lot better than I ever did at the beginning! I think I like this one better. I think the elements stand out better on this one against the dark paper. GREAT JOB!!!
 
This page is awesome!! I can't believe this is your first page. Like Meg said the composition is awesome. I think the only thing I would play with is maybe making the strip a patterned paper on this one. And that's only a maybe and something I would play with and then probably end up with a solid in the end. With the other page the background looks much more patterned so the solid balances it perfectly, so that is just something i would play with but not necessarily change. But that is also based on my scrapping style...it still is an awesome page either way. I love the sentiment of the wordart. I also love how you used the ribbon. I have a really hard time with curly ribbon. This is fantastic.
 
Wow, great! Love the picture and the composition.
And great shadowing: to me that's still difficult.
If you would force me to change/try something on this page, i would probably play with the position of your photo/elements/strips-cluster: maybe a tiny bit higher on the page so your ribbon will not touch the bottom. PEANUTS!!
 

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